Tuesday, May 13, 2025

Ian Rogers poetry collection - Our Time at the Pond

                                                                     Our Time at the Pond

By Ian Rogers

 

Introduction

              In this anthology of Japanese poetry, I used the “association and progression” approach to select and organize these poems. Each poem is arranged according to where it would fall in a seasonal progression, from Spring to winter. The idea for this anthology came from Basho’s famous frog hokku and Buson’s frog hokku, honoring and remembering Basho’s life and poetry. The poetry in this anthology is bookended by the frog poems, with Basho’s Spring frog poem at the beginning, and Buson’s winter frog poem at the end. While these two align chronologically, this anthology is not in chronological order. The poems in between are connected by association, loosely following a narrative of youth, beauty, and love of life towards a more reflective and emotional end. This reflects Basho's life and his legacy, which Buson carried on. Together, these poems capture the joy of life, but are coupled with the burdens of grief and impermanence.

 

Basho Haiku & Out in the Streets: #829. Spring [1685] (Basho)

At an old pond,

a frog takes a sudden plunge.

The sound of water.

 

Discussion:

              This simple poem employs beautiful imagery to really examine a moment in time. This was Basho’s specialty: painting images that are vibrant and powerful, fully taking advantage of every syllable. To start the anthology with this poem, one can be led to think about the moment. The past and future fade away as one mindfully acknowledges their senses in the now. Something as ordinary as a frog jumping into the water in an old murky pond is hardly a rare sight, but it is nonetheless evocative. This youthful frog carries with it youthful ignorance of anything beyond the moment.

 

Salad Anniversary excerpts Jack Stam trans: PDF Page 8 (Tawara Machi)

Shower shelter

under a little street-stand,

a glass of sake ...

What a happy, happy thing,

To be, and be alive.

 

Discussion:

              This poem jumps us hundreds of years into the future chronologically, but nonetheless connects well with Basho’s poem. Tawara Machi captured a moment. This is a moment of pure enjoyment of life. Even while having to take shelter from the rain, life is good. It acknowledges the moment and reaffirms that happy moments like this one bring us the joy of living. Again, we are still reveling in the ordinary, as nothing about this moment is exceptional, and yet it resonates with us.

 

Ariwara no Narihira poetry: #109. Felicitations. Composed when there was a fortieth-year celebration for the Horikawa Chancellor at the Kujō Mansion (Ariwara no Narihira)

Scatter at random,

O blossoms of the cherry,

 and cloud the heavens,

that you may conceal the path

 old age is said to follow.

 

Discussion:

              This poem was written as a celebration for a chancellor who is facing a large milestone in their life, their fortieth birthday. This poem, much like the last, advises us to keep our eyes on the ground. While Tawara Machi was sheltered by a street stand, this poem opts to use cherry blossoms to keep us grounded and focused on the moment over the future. The acknowledgment of the path to the heavens serves to introduce the idea of mortality and death, but advises we should remain willfully ignorant anyway.

Kokinshu sequence (from Spring 2): #182. Spring. [late 9th century] (Otomo no Kuronushi)

Everyone feels grief

when cherry blossoms scatter.

Might they then be tears-

those drops of moisture falling

in the gentle rains of spring?

 

Discussion:

              This poem employs cherry blossoms to a different effect, acknowledging the grief that comes with impermanence. This poem discards willful ignorance of mortality and instead chooses to face it head-on. Impermanence is painted as part of the world, which ties into Buddhist beliefs like Mujo. It also employs a sort of animism that fits with Shinto, by turning the rain into nature’s tears. I like the contrast between this poem and the last, from using the cherry blossoms to hide impermanence to thinking about them embodying impermanence. This shows a shift in how we view the world around us. No longer are we fully in the moment, but rather,r we are coping with reality and trying to understand grief.

 

Basho Travel Accounts: Page 537 (Basho)

A dream of warriors,

 and after dreaming is done,

the summer grasses.

 

Discussion:

              This poem moves into the realm of contemplation of life and the past. After visiting an old battlefield, Basho writes this account. Little remained except for some mounds in the dirt among summer grass. This poem is fully rooted in impermanence, as little to nothing remains except a dream of a battle in the past. Time has turned the battlefield into a simple field of grass. Acknowledging the past is good, but we are still brought back to the moment after the dream fades, and the summer grasses take the focus back.

 

Gotoba Teika Shinkokinshu: Autumn [1181] (Teika)

If you think on it,

you can see no change in color

on Heaven's High Plain:

 Autumn is not in the sky

but in the light of the moon.

 

Discussion:

This poem is also entirely contemplative and serves as the only autumn poem in this collection. While autumn is popular for the emphasis on impermanence with the slow changing of leaves and shift in weather, it doesn’t fit quite as well when focusing on grief, which shows itself as more of a winter topic (death). The poem states that the heavens, like the clouds and sky, remain the same regardless of season. This observation calls back to other poems that sought to avoid looking up to heaven. We are now confronting heaven directly, and the moonlight allows us to better view the effects of autumn around us.

 

Carter Early Medieval Age: #272. LAMENTS. [From a hundred-poem sequence] (Fujiwara no Shunzei)

How is it that ducks

 are able to stay afloat

out on the water,

 while I feel myself sinking

even here on the land?

 

Discussion:

              This poem connects back to the pond theme and the wet motif that many of these poems have been carrying. I think it adequately represents what it feels like to be buried by grief. In moments where grief hits you, it can feel as though you can barely stand. Sometimes life feels as though it is pulling you down. Nature, perplexingly, continues on regardless. Ducks will keep floating, despite our emotions. I think that this poem suggests some sort of constancy in nature despite the impermanence of it all.

 

Buson and Issa Poems: #994. Winter (Buson)

At that old pond

The frog is growing old now-

among fallen leaves.

 

Discussion:

              This is the poem that truly inspired this anthology. A beautiful reference to Basho’s masterful poem and a frank acknowledgement of the passage of time and passing of Basho. Being a winter poem, it is rooted in death. The frog is surely close to death and surrounded by death. Despite this, we are simply back to just being in the moment among this imagery. Judgements, ponderings about impermanence and death, they all don’t really matter. Nature moves on regardless, and time keeps going. Ultimately, we are always bound to the moment, despite all our philosophizing.

Conclusion

              This anthology took me on a journey of mindfulness and being present. I hope that some of that has been conveyed. Dealing with loss is a heavy topic, and there are a lot of ways to approach it. I find Buson’s frog poem really captures the essence of paying homage respectfully and thoughtfully. This anthology reflects a lot of Japanese thought on not only grief, but impermanence and the value of nature. I hope you enjoyed.

 

Bonus: Scrapped Idea

              One idea I had while composing these after acknowledging grief as a theme was the 5 stages of grief: Denial, Anger, Bargaining, Depression, and Acceptance. Many of these stages, such as depression and acceptance, are easy to find in the literature and are present in this anthology. Unfortunately, I struggled to find poems that fit the other stages, especially for anger. I challenge the reader to look for poetry that could fit in an anthology of the stages of grief.

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